Poetry Sunday: Future Plans by Kate Barnes
When I read Kate Barnes' poem last week, I laughed out loud with a feeling of recognition. I know the woman in her poem. In fact, I see her in the mirror every day.
Future Plansby Kate Barnes
When I am an old, old woman I may very well be
living all alone like many another before me
and I rather look forward to the day when I shall have
a tumbledown house on a hill top and behave
just as I wish to. No more need to be proud—
at the tag end of life one is at last allowed
to be answerable to no one. Then I shall wear
a shapeless felt hat clapped on over my white hair,
sneakers with holes for the toes, and a ragged dress.
My house shall be always in a deep-drifted mess,
my overgrown garden a jungle. I shall keep a crew
of cats and dogs, with perhaps a goat or two
for my agate-eyed familiars. And what delight
I shall take in the vagaries of day and night,
in the wind in the branches, in the rain on the roof!
I shall toss like an old leaf, weather-mad, without reproof.
I’ll wake when I please, and when I please I shall doze;
whatever I think, I shall say; and I suppose
that with such a habit of speech I’ll be let well alone
to mumble plain truth like an old dog with a bare bone.
a pretty good description of how mrs. m's and my life go...
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely life you must have.
DeleteAs a member of the opposite sex, I hereby declare that I will do the same if I am the last left standing!
ReplyDeleteI like the image of tossing "like an old leaf, weather-made, without reproof."
DeleteHeaded that way! "My house shall be always in a deep-drifted mess,
ReplyDeletemy overgrown garden a jungle."
I'm well on my way!
DeleteThis is going to be when I'm older. No doubt!
ReplyDeleteYou've got years and years to plan it.
DeleteI love this poem! I want to be like that when I'm old and a bit tumbled down myself.
ReplyDelete"Tumbled down" - that's how I feel some days.
DeleteThat will be me, if I make it to that age. I know it!
ReplyDeleteSomething to look forward to!
DeleteThis octogenarian hasn't reached that stage in her life yet, but it is something to look forward to! Fun poem! P x
ReplyDeleteI found it very relatable.
DeleteHa! That does sound like a very good place to be! A lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteIt's a future that we can embrace, can't we?
Delete"I rather look forward to the day when I shall have
ReplyDeletea tumbledown house on a hill top and behave
just as I wish to."
I've got plans for a Widows' Home to be situated in the mountains near the ocean beside the forests and there is plenty of room for you...
Sounds like a perfect spot!
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